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truth...we loved
we laughed
we lived...

but then...

you lied
you laughed
i died...

because i love you.Listen to me, even just for a few seconds.

Take a few deep breaths, (even if you feel like giving in)
and I'll heal your heart
through soft kisses
as I take you in to a different world.

You are the most beautiful thing that has ever happened to me,
and if I could,
I would write you a song about our love just so you know that you are mine.

Baby boy,
don't hate yourself,
because I believe in you.

Lost.She listens to sad songs
so that they can match her broken heart
in melody.

She cries herself to sleep every night,
not saying a word in between her tears.

It's been so long since she's smiled a real smile,
that she doesn't even know how happiness feels.

Hear Me SayHear me say what I have to say
Hear me say something impossible to believe
I could have not said this with words created by my dreadful tounge
But words that is created through my artistic skill

Just hear me say to you
That you are really beautiful
It's mainly your eyes I try to look at and not your chest
Or below your waist

You may just think of me as some other man
But hear me what I have to say
I'm not like every childish boy that thinks they are men
I'm someone greater than that

Hear me say to you the words that paints a picture in the mind
Were paint and brush is not required
Hear me say that I wrote this piece of art for y

tears don't drown your sorrowlost one,

Why do you always seem so sad? Your eyes are deep cerulean swirls of the sea, calm on the surface but fatal underneath with endless anfractuosities. Crestfallen rivers find their way down your cheeks and fall like raindrops on your cold hands.

If you were a song you would be the most broken and desolate winter nocturne in solo. You would be the beautiful heartbreaking tune of the violinist in the park, leaning down to close his old case full of coins.

You said you could play the piano for hours, from sunrise to sunset and into the quiescent night, but I know your slender fingers always remain the same temperature---below zero. An

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I wrote a poem today!

_{Usually I hate writing poems because I obsess over rhymes too much and all my poems end up cheesy as heck, but this one I actually like. AND it rhymes! So I illustrated it and...here it is?}

IN CELEBRATION OF MY 6TH YEAR ON DA I GUESS

[EDIT] holy granole how did this get over 2000 faves

th-
thanks everyone!

[EDIT AGAIN]

Ok, a lot of people seems to be confused about the "whores" part, so I thought I'd make it clearer. By no means is this an insult to sexually flamboyant people.
The line "politicians and whores" is commonly associated with social decay (originated from Watchmen, I believe) and it's also what a lot of nihilists say when they rant about how much the world sucks. Since I'm kinda mocking their attitude here, I quoted them. I thought people would catch the meaning on their own, as I highly dislike explaining something like this, but apparently some people didn't! Oops.

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~KZeolite Jan 29, 2013 Hobbyist Writer

This is beautiful!

~TheSingleCopy Jan 21, 2013 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

I really like this! Made me think a lot lol.

~HinderRat Jan 21, 2013

cool

~workinginprogess Sep 12, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

This. Is. Beautiful. <[link]>

=VermillionFenrir Aug 29, 2012 Artist

omg this is so beautiful and touching! I cant even described how your art and the message has touched me

Its so god freakin beautiful!

seriously,this making me want to do also draw something liek this,if only my scanner can work well in a time like this

~philippv745 Aug 25, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

One of the best poems I've ever read, not just because of the wording, but because I love poetry that really makes you think.

~Ilikesclamchowder Feb 15, 2012 Student General Artist

I remember seeing this a long time ago!
It was back when I didn't have an account, maybe a month earlier I made one.
I never forgot this! And here I see it again!
This is such a wonder piece <3 I love everything about it and it really gets you thinking.

*DRexySeamfire Jan 1, 2012 Hobbyist Photographer

By the way. You should read up on green-house gasses. We wouldn't be here without them.

~NightMargin Jan 2, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

I am well aware! But you CAN have too much of a good thing, you know! Besides, for me to make the rhyme and rhythm, I can't exactly use "an amount of greenhouse gases that is several hundred ppms above the healthy dose that earth should receive" and give a comprehensive list of all of them

In other words, for the flow to not sound awkward, I'd have to sacrifice some
*beat*
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*DRexySeamfire Jan 2, 2012 Hobbyist Photographer

I see)) Just stuck out at me a little bit. How about using the word pollution instead of green-house gasses? Just a thought, whould keep to the beat and sound correct))))

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