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Technically it's kind of a cutscene/prequel thing but you get the idea!

First part of Margin. (sorry it's kind of short!)

Next part coming sometime in the near future.



Music is mine

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:iconcatlover234:
catlover234 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Niiiice! keep up the good work mate!
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timbomaster111 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice Please make more!!!
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:iconnightmargin:
NightMargin Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I will someday!
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Martine-larcX Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Wow. 
This could really make up a really nice visual novel once its completed :D
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:iconnightmargin:
NightMargin Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope so too! ;u;
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MilagrosSofia Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
Music is awesome, have you done it yourself?
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AnthemFortheDeaf Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
intriguing way of bringing reader in, nice visuals and just interesting way of story telling.

do you happen to have nintendo ds? because there is this game called '999: Nine Hours, Nine Persons, Nine Doors' and this story youre telling reminds me of the way this game is formatted with the narrative, it's also a unique game.. this reminds me of it, if you have time definitely check it out.
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:iconplasterbrain:
plasterbrain Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My only suggestion is to allow the user to advance the slide with the arrow keys. But really nicely done! yay
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:iconnightmargin:
NightMargin Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh lordy I've been trying to get that to work for ages! sadly to no avail...
do you have any suggestions/tutorials? *A*!!!
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plasterbrain Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
GOOGLING FOR THIRTY SECONDS FOUND ME THIS
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i use as2 idk what you use
good luck soldier!
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:iconnightmargin:
NightMargin Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Heey that's the one I tried!
Couldn't get it to link up with scenes though...
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TheAnimeNeko11 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Oh my god, this is actually amazing. I really do love it <3 your so very talented!
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:iconnightmargin:
NightMargin Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! <3
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:iconbloodysae:
bloodysae Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
omfg
this, my friend, is amazing. i love it very much, even if it's only the begining of the story.
i love it, the music is great, the art is great, everything is great!
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:iconnightmargin:
NightMargin Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! ;u;
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olitiger Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow that was AMAZING!! i really got into the story and its really moving in a way
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olitiger Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hehe no worries!! cant wait to see more~~!!
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:iconnightmargin:
NightMargin Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
aaaa thank you so much! ;u;
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:iconhornswoggled:
hornswoggled Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
woah this is so awesome how are you so talented omg
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:iconnightmargin:
NightMargin Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! ;;
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moonyelloweyes Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Student General Artist
Intriguing opening, but I wouldn't have so many clicks. It's annoying to have to click for every little action. Figure out what's necessary, or what would make a good pause in the story, and then delete the extraneous.
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NightMargin Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
What do you mean by "clicks"? like the sound that the buttons play? or the buttons themselves?

I can easily disable the sounds, but I'm not sure if I can take away the buttons in a visual novel?

Thanks for the feedback!
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moonyelloweyes Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Student General Artist
I mean the number of times I physically have to click the mouse. I shouldn't have to push the button as many times as you have in this chapter. A lot the smaller actions can be connected under one click instead of divided up among several.
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NightMargin Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ooh, any recommendations on how I can do that?
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moonyelloweyes Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Just look for series of actions you can string together, like a series of small camera moves or small actions that shouldn't need clicks in-between. It's up to you how to group them, but as director and editor, it's all about how you see you project being seen by the audience.
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NightMargin Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ooh I see what you mean now!

I've actually been trying to figure all that intricate actionscript stuff with little success, if you can recommend any good resources on the subject matter I will be forever in your debt
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moonyelloweyes Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student General Artist
Google, my friend, and YouTube as well. There are lots of free tutorials everywhere. : )
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:iconnightmargin:
NightMargin Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh believe me, I have scoured the earth for all kinds of visual novel related tutorials to little avail. You know how you're looking for that one very specific thing and it's never there? Like for the moment I'm actually more worried about the REALLY basic stuff like syncing multiple audio files, manual panning, and text effects. (I've actually found a way to do some pretty cool text effects but the setup process was pretty messy so that's a bummer!)
how do people code entire games in flash
how do people code
how do
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jorgealison Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG I'M CURIOUS
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reversefowards Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
man this is awesome. I've always wanted to do something like this!!! very nice!
Did you compose the music yourself? What program do you use..?
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Wave-kun Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow this is really amazing. Great job Night. Can't wait for the next part.
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Ranvionist26 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Wow... for some reason this is give me astral project feel
Well done Night :3
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NobodysSpecial Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012
Ah, yes, it could be a bit longer. But the fact that it's short makes everyone want more! Well done as usual, Miss Night. I look forward to the next installment!
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Tiger-Of-The-Tundra Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012
Woah... I love the beginning-of-video-game feel to it, with the Protagonist, and the speach box at the bottom... And the feeling of curiosity, learning, but not minding that you don't know all of what's happening... fantastic!! And it's all so beautiful, that cold, bright world...

The music is so chillingly beautiful. I don't feel scared listening to it, but it's haunting. Powerfully dark, yet simple and magical.
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Fluffy0w0Demon Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Cool ^w^ Can't wait to see next part
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Bionico2OO7 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that is awesome

fantastic work!
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PikachuGirl11 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The music set the mood and atmosphere just perfectly along with the drawings. It was a wonderful balance of artwork and suspension.
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Hamncheese95 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
HOLY CRAP this amazing!
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yoryk123 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
omg night, once againg you did it :iconbravoplz:
i do really can't wait to see what's next :3:
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Espeo9023 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconcraiplz: I squealed when I saw this in my messages.
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:iconrockafiller:
Rockafiller Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh man oh man oh man this is looking pretty cool!
seriously can't wait for more! aaaaaaaaaa
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amitoxi Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
'-' Hm....*favorites* not sure what to say, but I can't wait to see more. Short and sweet. XD
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Sketching-Panda-Ren Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
=w= I just stayed at the end for a min to listen to the wonderful music.
Is it just me or does the clicks remind you of a ticking clock?
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Emruki Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
"And the protagonist is dying."

That is a good hook. x'D <3 Wonderfully compelling start. Well done on the accompanying music, too!
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:iconhuoryu:
Huoryu Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Student General Artist
SO
COOL
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:iconswaetshrit:
swaetshrit Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh man I love it. This is really, really cool so far!
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AlterMann52 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:omg: I want more please make them quick!
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SkeleVee Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
If I wrote a whole essay on how much I love this, it STILL couldn't express all of what I feel... ;w; I... I can't even...

It's like a storybook! With beautiful music and just... So many feels!!:love: The ambiance is just... <3 aaaaaah~!
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:iconvespayik:
Vespayik Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my gosh you sure know how to make someone know what happens next!
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raimeiuta Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
JFC MAN I'M SO STOKED THIS IS THE COOLEST THING I'VE EVER SEEN IN MY LIIIIIIIIIIIIIFFFFFFFFEEEEEEEE
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